tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-594689579626985769.post1362721679630970425..comments2023-07-07T01:21:18.346-08:00Comments on Impudent Hatchlings: DON'T DROP THE LIVER!Hillary Jacqueshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10394482441040531244noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-594689579626985769.post-91714911255311597352011-06-23T20:17:31.600-08:002011-06-23T20:17:31.600-08:00Thanks! *twitches off into the sunset*Thanks! *twitches off into the sunset*Hillary Jacqueshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10394482441040531244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-594689579626985769.post-13477481862496895412011-06-23T15:18:59.062-08:002011-06-23T15:18:59.062-08:00The question is - what DOESN"T make me twitch...The question is - what DOESN"T make me twitch while I'm revising? ;-)<br /><br />Good luck with your revisions!Samantha Sottohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14116257082088369600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-594689579626985769.post-23520846366213690072011-06-22T19:16:19.408-08:002011-06-22T19:16:19.408-08:00"But Cobra," she said pointedly, "w..."But Cobra," she said pointedly, "what's wrong with dialogue tags?"<br /><br />I'm with you, Sommer. In fact, I sometimes fiddle with the language until I start to lose the story. That is not good either.<br /><br />BETAs, Tiffany, BETAs. You know what I'm talking about. :DHillary Jacqueshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10394482441040531244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-594689579626985769.post-55738298150086736702011-06-22T07:20:10.213-08:002011-06-22T07:20:10.213-08:00The worst to me is when I know something is wrong,...The worst to me is when I know something is wrong, but I can't quite put my finger on exactly what it is. I'm hopeful that this will get easier with experience, and it seems to be.Tiffany Alleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14847517902913329657noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-594689579626985769.post-56763045477047217612011-06-22T04:48:43.139-08:002011-06-22T04:48:43.139-08:00Staring at a paragraph that has something in it th...Staring at a paragraph that has something in it that I need, and I can't just delete it or the spot before or the spot after won't make any sense, but the paragraph is not good and I have no idea how to fix it.<br /><br />I hate that moment.Sommer Leighhttp://www.sommerleigh.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-594689579626985769.post-51808732263194842052011-06-22T03:58:22.984-08:002011-06-22T03:58:22.984-08:00Realizing that a scene is 92.3% telling and then t...Realizing that a scene is 92.3% telling and then trying to figure out how to "show" the information. Many tears (and foul words) flow. <br /><br />Also, fixing the bajillion dialogue tags in my stories makes me vomit a little in my mouth.CobraMisfithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08076556754472094027noreply@blogger.com