If you want an idea of how difficult it is to write this short a story, please note that the two preceding sentences exceed 25 words. Getting the idea?
Below is my story, followed by the entire talented blog crew.
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Couldn't Love You More
Her warm brown eyes and sweet-sketched smile.
Your hands on her bare bronze skin.
This poison isn’t painless, but
If I can’t have you…
Couldn't Love You More
Her warm brown eyes and sweet-sketched smile.
Your hands on her bare bronze skin.
This poison isn’t painless, but
If I can’t have you…
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HERE BE HORRORS UNSPEAKABLE. Just Kidding. It's only me.
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Oh yikes, a jilted lover with a murderous bent. Now there's a story in a neat little package. Well done!
ReplyDeleteOoooh, nice! The power of love ..... Muhahaha ;o)
ReplyDeleteI was dying to add a rhyming ending to that. :) "I still win" fit neatly into my head. ;)
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Great piece of writing. Something ominous awaits, I can feel it.
ReplyDeleteI like Aimee Laine's addition. It's a shame hint fiction is so bound by rules, huh?
ReplyDeleteThat said, I want to echo the sentiments of the others too. There's something threatening here, and it's ready to pounce. Well done!
I can't even remember how many other lines and variations of this I cut. Hint Fic is a maddening invention.
ReplyDeleteThis one could take us many directions... nice one!
ReplyDeleteOoh, I liked this one.
ReplyDeleteThere are layers within layers, and the more I read it, I see different ways this could go.
Nice job.
I saw Romeo at Juliet's side in this :)
ReplyDeleteVery nice! You packed a lot into your 25 words.
ReplyDeleteThanks, you guys. Appreciate you stopping by to read. This form utterly intrigues me.
ReplyDeleteOkay...WOW. This story was amazing!!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Trisha! So glad you liked it.
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