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DEAR JOHN~a drabble
“I’m not good with art,” John says, squinting at the note.
I look down at the crisp white paper, the even black script.
“It’s not art.” I point to the three distinct words. How can he not see? “It says…”
He makes an impatient sound, a sound of finality. The world is suddenly blurry and I blink to clear my eyes.
“Sorry. You know I can’t find the meaning in this creative shit.” He scuffs out of the room, drops into his ergo-set and links into the feeds.
The words droop, the ink bleeding away. “It says ‘I love you’.”
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Good stuff. This definitely squeezed my heart. What a great addition to the mix.
ReplyDeleteLoved it. Poor girl though... Just watched The Office and I could so see Erin as the girl. LOL
ReplyDeleteCute posting.
ReplyDeleteSweet tale. We seem to be bringing our A-game to these drabbles...it's a high standard to meet!
ReplyDeleteGreat post, hillary. I felt bad for the girl. She must have felt really sad at the way John treated her.
ReplyDeleteOh! I love it! There is a lot of feelings in so few words. Can I punch John? Please?
ReplyDeleteAheila, of course you may punch him (in 100 words or less).
ReplyDeleteThis Blog: bringing people to tears since 11/15/10 at 2:54 PM. Yesss!
ReplyDeleteP.S. Hi Sian. *waves*
I get the second punch! Really nice little story here.
ReplyDeleteWhoa, the people are getting violent here. This may be the most powerful 100 words I've ever compiled...I think I like it.
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